It is not unusual for a community to feel that their home village has its own personality, and for some that sense of inclusion makes it almost a member of their own family. That's the way it is in Mellowdene.
We even have Mellowdene Day. This is a chance bring together the community to celebrate our village and each other.
I'm not sure why we hold the day at a time of year when the weather is starting to be a bit grotty. I suppose it's possible that our ancestors didn't want it to conflict with the spring's Melting Festival. A number of years ago the then mayor proposed that we hold a more formal annual ceremony, but because of practicalities this aspect became something we hold every five years.
Our current mayor - Ramsey Nettlefield - maintains the tradition, but the more subdued nature of the event feels more natural and respectful.
The village hall is used as a venue, and there are representatives of the four families who originally settled in the area all those years ago.
Last time, Howard Brighteyes, Rocky Babblebrook, Hazel Dappledawn and my brother Newton took the platform. Together they told the tale of camping by Sweetwater Lake and the months that led to the establishment of Mellowdene, a story all our native-born residents know from their schooldays.
Of course, Newton being Newton, he concentrated on more technical aspects - how those practical rabbits of yesteryear were able to divert the overflow of the lake so that - instead of being simply one of the tributaries to the river - it provided the water supply that feeds the valley.
This act was one of the reasons that the families moved down out of the foothills and began to build Mellowdene.
We are grateful to those bunnies and their foresight.
Another consequence of Mellowdene Day is the influence on the school syllabus. Most teachers give the children a small project - to find out what their friends and family are grateful for over the past year and highlight common areas. On top of this, the children are encouraged to think about their own lives and tell their own families what makes them grateful.
In past years, Beverley and Brendan have reported back with the usual things - it's always lovely to hear "mummy and daddy" - but occasionally we are surprised. This year was one of those years.
Beverley was organised as usual. She had her notebook and stood before Cecile and me, waiting to read out her carefully prepared prose.
"Go ahead, pudding," I prompted.
"Okay daddy," she smiled.
"This year I am grateful for my family, who continue to love me, listen to me, stretch me, make me more..." - she winked at Brendan - "...tolerant, give me structure, a lovely home, forgive my lapses..." She continued in this vein for a time, extending her gratitude to the wider community, before concluding, "...and ice cream."
Brendan had been pretending to doze off towards the end of Beverley's little speech, feigning a yawn and stretching as we applauded our daughter's efforts.
"Me now?" he said, scrambling onto his feet.
"Yes please, dear," said Cecile, straightening her back to indicate rapt attention.
"Right," said Brendan, pulling out a scrap of crumpled paper he had tucked in his waistband. He affected a cough as if he was clearing his throat. "Ladies and Gentlemen, here being a considered list of stuff I'm glad about." He paused to gauge our reaction before carrying on. "Mum. Dad. Russell. Beverley. Aunt Eliza. Uncle Merlin. Snorker, Uncle Rowan,..."
He listed every relation in Mellowdene, then moved on to his friends, the first being Lucky Snow-Warren of course. As he continued to rattle off the sequence of names, I heard Cecile whisper, "How has he fit all those names on that bit of paper?" but Brendan was oblivious to the comment.
"And not forgetting Flash Gopher, Captain Ginger Beard and his Pirate Crew, Billy the Blue Robot,..."
Beverley stared at her brother. Russell waved his arms happily when chocolate appeared in the list. Brendan nodded to his little brother at this, and as the favourite foods came to an end he added, "and thanks to my sister for reminding me of ice cream."
We thought that he'd finished but no. He extended an arm in the direction of Eliza and Merlin's rooms. "And one more important thing. I'm grateful that Orton found his way to us. He's had a rotten thing happen to him - his family and all that - but we were there for him and I'm so glad that we were there to help. And we have, I think."
He reddened slightly as he said his final words. "We love him."
Cecile wiped her eyes. Beverley ran to her brother and gave him a hug. He responded half-heartedly with a "Geroff!" but we knew he wasn't serious.
Russell giggled.
There are many reasons to be grateful. Sylvania is full of them.
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Beautiful story, Jackson. I love the way you have differentiated the two siblings' modes of speech - it added a realism and charm. Brendan's list is awesome. :)
ReplyDeleteHi GreyRabbit, and thanks!
DeleteBeverley and Brendan have evolved into two distinct personalities, so I'm happy that their speaking voices help show that. It's not always clear where Brendan's mind goes, so it's always fun to write for him. In fact, I'm fond of the pair of them!
Aww this is wonderful! Sylvanians are very grateful creatures and I think you have highlighted that nicely in your story. It's nice to see how everyone is gathered to celebrate Mellowdene Day together, it seems to be a lovely tradition. I am also amazed at how Brendan was able to fit so many names on that tiny scrap of paper but I guess he knew the people he was grateful for in his life off by heart. That was one extensive list! What a sweet ending, I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing it, it really made my heart melt!
ReplyDeleteHugs, Emily and the critters of Dandelion Creek
Thanks Emily, and my Mellowdeners send hugs too!
DeleteI'm pleased you enjoyed this story, especially as it was quite quickly written with time getting short. I suspect Brendan has his own code or shorthand to help jog his memory. He undoubtedly remembered other things as he spoke too!
Hi Jackson! This was such a sweet story! It was very heart-warming!
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of Mellowdene Day. It sounds like a great way for the villagers to exercise their gratitude and show their love for each other, as well as remembering their ancestors!
Both Beverley and Brendan's speeches were adorable! Thanks for sharing this lovely story! :)
Thanks Kelsie. Yes, Mellowdene Day has evolved over the years. The formal ceremony may not be held every year, but it is celelebrated annually in other ways. The Mellowdene Examiner publishes a supplement where we show gratitude to villagers past and present by honouring their deeds. Cecile's late father was mentioned five or six years ago, which touched her greatly.
DeleteBeverley always mentions ice cream in her speech, liking it so much, so that has become a family joke. Brendan's speeches vary dependent upon his whims. Sometimes short and to the point, but sometimes extended and occasionally odd!
Have a great week!
Dear Jackson.... and I'm grateful for this lovely and heartwarming story. Your son Brendan wears his heart in the right place - as we say here. Be proud of your kids! Florence Holiday and her Purrchester neighbours are waving a friendly "hello"!
ReplyDeleteWarm hellos to Florence and the Purrchester population!
DeleteI'm delighted you enjoyed my story. And yes, Brendan is a warm-hearted little chap. When his mind pauses from jumping from one thing to another, he'll say something and it's like the sun coming out! He and Beverley continually make Cecile and I proud. We wonder what Russell will bring to the mix once he starts talking with proper words!
Aw, Jackson, what a lovely story for the Gratitude theme. You were really creative with the lists and the Mellowdene Day. I really liked it. Brendan was so sweet to think of Orton at the end, and Beverly listing ice cream made me chuckle. You certainly expressed their personalities very well in this post. Looking forward to reading more from you and the villagers in Mellowdene. Have a great day!
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Hi Emilie! It's lovely to know you enjoy my tales. Beverley could easily be an ice cream addict if we let her! We knew Brendan was pleased to have another young boy in the family, but to say what he said - well, we're proud of him.
DeleteOur best wishes to you, Millie and your other villagers!
Hello Jackson!
ReplyDeleteLoved this story! It was a great idea to write about Mellowdene Day, the celebration of the village itself, since being part of it is what ties all of the citizens together in a cycle of gratitude, as you mentioned in the text. It's no wonder they all love their town so much, as it's such a friendly place!
I like the coat of arms you created, and the detailed backstory regarding the origins of the town. The ceremony was also a great idea, loved the pictures!
Brendan and Beverley's speeches were indeed very in character for each of them, haha! Can't forget about Flash Gopher, indeed! Loved that Brendan mentioned Orton, and the heart-warming ending to the story!.
Thank you for sharing!
Have a great week.
Thanks for your comments, Ayrell!
DeleteYes - Brendan remains fanatical about watching Flash Gopher on TV, but in play he still dresses as Mink the Merciless, leaving Lucky to dress up as Flash.
I created the coat of arms for the Bake Off story but it was just in the background; I thought I may as well show it off in this story!
Bye for now!